Away with the Fairies

Saturday, July 22, 2006

A Sonnet

This is an attempt to discipline the ideas in my head into a controlled pattern. I have never written a poem before so randomly embarked 'the sonnet' as I figured it will be a structured way to capture my thought. Be gentle dear critics, remembering this is my debut, and read it out loud! (surely the golden rule in reading a poem)

Quenched

"Open", the Calling's message becomes clear
And illuminating, through the reach down
To draw my hands from covering each ear;
I listen, waiting for what is spoken.

Muffled voices echo from below.
The silenced are drowning, deep in a well:
Their stories and dreams have no place to go.
Forbidden to sing; forbidden to tell.

Straining, I approach the structure, and see,
One stone that was formed from my indifference.
As it crumbles, others stop and draw near.
Their presence will demolish the silence.

Calling, sweet Calling interrupt my walk,
Without you I am deafened by my own talk.


3 Comments:

At 1:55 AM, Blogger Smash said...

Oh, how beautiful, Beth!
I think I will write it out and keep it in my bible for a while.
lots of love,
Smash.
PS. I love the pic, too. Did you take it?
PPS. Do you have the dates of when you'll be in Canadia?
PPPS. (I know. this is getting silly). Thanks for the lovely note on my blog. I am very excited. And we're pretty much settled on the 30th of December. xoxo

 
At 9:49 AM, Blogger Bethybu said...

Thankyou sparkling star! hope you are having fun planning everything- I always felt that planning a wedding was very much like directing a play- where you also play the leading role of 'bride'.

Glad you liked the picture- It is one of my favourites, but I didn't take it. I am one of the seemingly lost, wandering figures and the hazy backdrop is the mighty Victoria falls on the Zimbabwean border. At the time the water vapour made it difficult to tell where the ground ended and where the waterfall began. I remember praying manically aloud for God to literally 'guide my step.' The girl who I was with thought I was a little crazy, which is funny because prior to that I was incredibly self-conscious, and took great pains to convince others I was normal. There is so much freedom in a little madness don't you think?
Anyway, back to my point- I love the picture as it depicts a sense of blindness and a promise of there being vastly more to existance thank I could ever comprehend in this life time...

We are in Calgary from the 6th till the 20th of August- hope you can come. (I think we are away camping for a few days in that period- I will let you know when as soon as possible.)It would be sooooooo lovely to see you. I am also incredibly excited to chill with the Aspergens!

 
At 1:36 PM, Blogger Hannah said...

Beth! I am missing you a LOT at the moment, being here. I too wish you could hope the ocean and join me on our tree for a germeinschaft. It is much needed. Life here is good though, and I continue to see the Lord's faithfulness as I have the opportunity to work with these teenagers and invest into their lives. I haven't even pulled a single prank yet, I NEED YOU! You must be getting ready to come to Calgary soon. Wish I could meet you there! When is Malawi happening? Lots and lots of love to you. xxxxxxxxxxx
PS The sonnet is beautiful and very evocative. I will have to read it a few more times.

 

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